A place for discussion of class reading for Mr. Hermance's Reading Comp class at the Norman Howard School
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it is good but there is one mistake try to dry food that is the only one i saw but it is good.
Julaina good job the only thing i would add is that you should say is how you are going to get to your sisters house
Emily you should of made your writing biger its a little hard to seee but I like it.
I think juliana's survivle plan is very creative and has a lot of ideas supporting her main ideas and I really like her tips to survive there are a lot supporting ideas.
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ReplyDeleteit is good but there is one mistake try to dry food that is the only one i saw but it is good.
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ReplyDeleteJulaina good job the only thing i would add is that you should say is how you are going to get to your sisters house
ReplyDeleteEmily you should of made your writing biger its a little hard to seee but I like it.
ReplyDeleteI think juliana's survivle plan is very creative and has a lot of ideas supporting her main ideas and I really like her tips to survive there are a lot supporting ideas.
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